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Write a complete essay which consists of introductory paragraph, developmental paragraph, and conclusion. The essay is based on the following question
QOESTION :
Some people believe that a mother should not work. Others argue this. Consider the problems that a working mother faces. Do you believe a mother should work? Defend your opinion.
INTRODUCTION :
There is a lot of reason for a mother have to work, she have to consider the risk which must be faced by its child. Although a mother should not work, because have to take care of the children at home. While there is a lot of loss and advantage of a mother require to work. Before a mother work, all the aspects of that kind of work have to in evaluation
1. The first sentence introduces the general topic of a mother not work.
There is a lot of reason for a mother have to work, she have to consider the risk which must be faced by its child.
2. The second sentence narrow the topic a mother should work.
Although a mother should not work, because have to take care of the children at home.
3. The third sentence restates he specific question.
While there is a lot of loss and advantage of a mother require to work.
4. The fourth sentence is the thesis statement. It gives the controlling idea of the essay.
Before a mother work, all the aspects of that kind of work have to in evaluation.




DEVELOPMENTAL PARAGRAPHS :
There is a lot of reason of a mother require to work the. First, a mother becoming single parent have to fulfill the its child requirement. Second, a mother wish to add the its husband earnings. Third, a mother will have a lot of science. Fourth, a mother will have a lot of friend. Fifth, a mother will be creative and peep out idea.
A mother need the work have advantage. First, a mother having work can fulfill the its child requirement. Second, a mother having work can enhance the science. Third, a mother having work can have a lot of friend. Fifth, a mother having work can peep out the creative idea.
However, A Mother need the work also has disadvantage. First, less give the attention to children, so that children become naughty. Second, less pay attention to the children growth. Third, less give the affection for the children of.
CONCLUSION :
My opinion of a mother have to work if it true she become the single parent, but if all family requirement have been fulfilled by its husband better a mother needn't work because has disadvantage is felt by children.